Hook options
“Your desk is missing one thing.”
curiosity — Start mid-motion as a hand pushes a keyboard back from a sterile home desk; laptop, mouse, and work notes fill the vertical frame.
“Your home desk still feels like a cubicle.”
relatability — Handheld close-up of a laptop, tangled charger, and abandoned coffee mug; a hand drops the mouse in frustration.
“Make your work desk feel like home again.”
aspiration — Open on the finished candlelit desk, then quickly pull the candle out of frame to reveal the colder before-state.
Shot list
- 01 · 0:00Voiceover: Your desk is missing one thing.On screen: Why it still feels corporateCamera: Start mid-motion as a hand pushes a keyboard back from a plain home desk. Keep the laptop, mouse, and work notes tightly framed; do not show the candle.
- 02 · 0:02Voiceover: And it's not another organizer.On screen: More organizing won't fix itCamera: Overhead phone shot as the hand straightens a pen cup, pauses, then lets it fall slightly crooked. Keep the desk visually cold and functional.
- 03 · 0:04Voiceover: It's a handmade soy candle.On screen: The five-second desk resetCamera: From the user's point of view, place the candle beside the laptop and strike a match. Cut closer as the wick catches; keep the label readable.
- 04 · 0:07Voiceover: Light it before you log on.On screen: Work mode, softenedCamera: Medium handheld shot from desk level. The flame burns in the foreground while the hand opens the laptop and places a warm drink beside it.
- 05 · 0:10Voiceover: Same desk. Way less office.On screen: Your home againCamera: Pull back to show the complete desk with the lit candle, laptop, drink, and softened practical lighting. Let the hand settle onto the keyboard.
- 06 · 0:13Voiceover: Shop the handmade soy candles at the link in bio.On screen: Shop candles — link in bioCamera: Close handheld shot of the burning candle beside the laptop. A hand rotates the jar so the label faces camera while the CTA appears above the platform UI area.
Sound
Warm lo-fi instrumental with soft percussion, muted keys, and a steady mid-tempo pulse; no vocals.
medium energy · original / library audio
Begin music immediately. Cut on each idea change rather than every beat. Feature the match strike and wick ignition as crisp sound-design moments, then slightly warm the music mix when the flame appears.
Call to action
Notes for the editor
Shoot vertical 9:16 on a phone with slight handheld movement. Film the finished candlelit desk first, then remove the candle and warm props for the before-state. Keep the product hidden until second four. Prioritize a readable label, visible flame, and clear before-and-after contrast. If timing runs long, shorten scene 4 rather than cutting the reveal or CTA.